Easttle Writing

Hello readers, today I am going to be talking about our classes Easttle Writing! We did the assessment because we have to do it twice a year. We write this about people playing in a water playground. Here is my writing and the photo about what we had to write about also I put in my planning.

Lunch tables

Water playground

A big bucket of water

A tree splashing water on people 

Lots of trees 

Pirate sail on entrance/exit

Umbrellas covering people from splashes

People waiting to go down the slide 

A Fake parrot looking around

People splashing in the water

Panting like mad I ran to a water park at the top of the water park I saw a sail with a flag wagging around. When I got in I looked around and saw trees surrounding the park I sat at the lunch table to eat my lunch when somebody caniballed and splashed water everywhere but the umbrella saved me and my lunch because it blocked the water from hitting me. So I ate all my lunch in peace and started to chat with my friends.

 I was going for a wander around in the water when suddenly tonnes of water splashed on my face because I walked under a gigantic bucket of water. I started to walk up the stairs to the slide when I was in front of the slide I slipped and fell on my but then slid down the slide. The slide was making a screeching noise as I went down slowly. Once I was out I saw an enormous parrot looking at me but I was thinking does he do something with water too when suddenly his mouth opened and vomited out water everywhere when the water was getting low because of the bucket refill and water slide and to clean the pool.

After the disaster I went to the pine tree to have fun It was squirting everywhere on my face. Wondering and wondering should I  leave but then I said it will be very busy out there so I will wait a bit longer. I went down the other slide when I slid down I had a drink of the  water falling on my face. Once I got down I went to the side of the pool again.

I went to the pool shop and brought me snorkels so I could dive around I was dodging people left and right. When suddenly I came across somthing shiny in the middle of the water I swam to it and there was actually loads of shiny things I took it out of the water and it turned out it was actually money I was so happy I bought me a big mac. I was off to the exit  and I said thank you to everybody in the gift shop and also said this is the best water park ever and bought a float so I went to my friend and gave him the floate and left.

My Holidays

Hi guys Jaedun here talk about my holidays I went to my Nana's in granddads and played with the pugs and bulldog the bulldog was chasing me and he jumped on me and knocked me over after that I went to the liquidator store and got some bargains when I went to my other  nanas I tested everything out.