Friday, 14 June 2019
⚽⚽Winter sport⚽⚽
This Term we are doing Winter Sport. We were going to vs \Hornby Hurricanes and we are the Hornby Hornets It was a real good game but sadly we lost but every body did real good. {here is me and my friend Tory talking about the game}.
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Hello Jaedun.
ReplyDeleteIt was good to read what you did at sport especially because I wasn't there to watch the teams play. It's good to talk with your team mates, that way you could talk about what strategies you could use.
Maybe next time you could use more punctuation and maybe not use red to write in. I found the red a little hard to read. Maybe if the text was larger it might be better.
Thank you for your comment Me and Tory was seeing what position I was going to be and we were defence but we changed to wings bye.
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