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Sunday, 24 February 2019

100 Word Count

At Hornby Primary Room 7 we have been doing 100 word counts thats when we have a prompt and we need to write about it and it has to have exactly 100 words here's mine enjoy.
The sun blazed on my skin while I laid in my pool then Jack’s dad said, “Come, we need to go right now!” We went to a camp.  It was called Camp Sunny side then suddenly Jack's dad Jeff gave him a knife and said, “Protect yourself, ok kid?” Suddenly the ground moved. I was unsteady on my feet  then lots of army men came and shouted “ GET IN THE BUS OK LITTLE KIDS NO PARENTS ALLOWED!” Then all the kids went in and left to a place far away an army base then Jack screamed “WHERE'S MR SNUGGLES MY TEDDY BEAR?”.
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4 comments:

  1. Vilar25 February 2019 at 12:56

    I like the way that you have done your 100 word count.

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  2. Anonymous1 March 2019 at 14:30

    I liked your story. How long did it take to finish it ?

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    2. Jaedun8 March 2019 at 10:55

      Hi Xavier thank you for your comment.It took me 1 day How long did it take you to finish yours.

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